Part 5 feedback

I was very happy with my feedback from part 5, I felt really positive about how I ended this module and was glad to see that my tutor was excited about the same works that I was and saw the same weaknesses that I did in some of the preparatory works – it again gives me confidence to know when I’m on the right path and when it’s not working.

We spoke a little about my personal style and how that has developed and about parallels with “primitive” art from other cultures. This is something I  should have addressed in Part 5 – it feels almost implicit in this subject particularly with my own approach of simplifying and honing in on what I deem to be the essentials as well as the bold but limited colour palette. Primitivism as a movement really interests me too – so many artists that have been huge influences on me were themselves influenced by the early works produced in other cultures across the world; Gauguin, Picasso, Matisse and Modigliani to name but a few.

Looking back at the whole unit.

I think there has been a vast improvement in my technical skills over the course of this module, I know I have pushed myself much harder than ever before and this has enabled me to work on much more interesting compositions than I would have attempted before the course and to finally produce the sort of work that I’ve always wanted to be doing.

I think that my work has been presented clearly and that there are strong pieces throughout the course but particularly towards the end of the module where I would hope you can see I have made decisions based on my strengths and passions in order to produce the best work.

Above all I feel that I have found my personal voice and am now capable of producing work that speaks both to and about me.

I think I have a good understanding of context although I would have liked to have more time to visit exhibitions in the second half of this module to really dig in to the many artists and movements that have influenced and continue to influence me.

 

 

 

 

 

Part 5: Assessing previous assignments

This is a little overdue – I forged ahead on part 5 feeling that I knew where my strengths lie and what I was excited about but forgetting to write it up! For me it’s felt quite obvious throughout what comes to me naturally and what I find more difficult. I’ve been surprised throughout at how much I’ve enjoyed all of the sections of the course including lots of elements I wasn’t that excited about beforehand but still when at last we came to the human figure it felt like coming home and I couldn’t wait to get started on every exercise, my subject choice for Part 5 came to me immediately. Here are my feelings on the previous assignments now that a little time has passed:

Assignment 1

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It’s really interesting looking at this again having spent the past year honing my skills! I still really like it but I think if I were to do it again now I’d make the objects fill more of the space so that the page was divided into bigger shapes and would do much less hatching so that it was a flatter, bolder and more abstract picture but keeping a focus on clashing patterns. I think this first part was supposed to show my usual work and it was probably a little misleading in that – the focus on pattern is new to this course; I’ve always loved it in other peoples work but hadn’t really played around with it much myself until this piece and I can still feel the joy of that in this picture but it is definitely fussier and messier than it needs to be.

Interestingly looking back on my feedback magnifying had been a suggestion and I don’t think I’d really understood it then but have come to the same conclusion myself now. I was also recommended to focus more on honing skills than on pattern which I put serious effort into, now I’m back on pattern – it is still so much what I love but I feel confident in my ability and my strengths now so I think I’m safe to return now!

Assignment 2

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This again I’m pleased to say I still really like, I still find it very evocative and emotive. I think the weaker element is the foreground – I tried to keep that hazy to bring attention into the room which it does but perhaps if I’d made the door and doorway darker and sharper it would have given more strength to the image. There was also a note to look at the direction of lines which I can see on the carpet could have been used more cleverly to add weight – the chair looks a little floaty here!

Assignment 3

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I’m not excited by this one. I initially submitted a different version which looks incredibly dull looking back on it now and when I reworked it after receiving my feedback I was really pleased with the change and the impact it had but now I feel like my preparatory sketches were much more exciting than this final piece and in trying to show competence I lost something. There is far too much wooded area which makes it feel quite samey – now I would crop the building in the foreground out entirely but keep the width and then I think it becomes a rather lovely composition with the trees and clouds echoing each other more like for like.

 

Assignment 4

These are still pretty fresh and yet I feel quite strongly about them now – I absolutely love the self portrait but not so much the other two. I think there is far too much white in the portrait of Joss and his legs don’t work for me now – I would make the background dark and bring the legs out and closer if I were doing it again, and the portrait of Zoe is fun but doesn’t stand out to me. It would make a nice screenprint or maybe if it was framed against a different bold colour it would really pop but alone it is lacking.

 

Project 5: Research

I wanted this personal project to reflect where I am in my life right now as well as focusing on the subjects that I love to draw most of all and so as I find myself a newly single mother I decided to focus on that relationship between mother and child – one so often repeated throughout art history. Here are some of the images I looked to for inspiration.

Hilda, Unity and dolls. Oil on Canvas by Stanley Spencer, Leeds Art Gallery.

Spencer, Stanley, 1891-1959; Family Group: Hilda, Unity and Dolls

I love this image so much – everything about it, the busyness, the pattern of the dress, the solemn faces and the combination of human and dolls faces with all the different angles – the whole composition is gorgeous. It would be fun too to try to emulate this sort of style but using pastels.

Mother and Child. Oil on canvas by Harold Gilman, Auckland Art Gallery.

HAROLD GILMAN Mother and child

This again I just love. I’ve just stopped breastfeeding my daughter and it was such an amazing intimate thing that I really wanted to makes sure I documented it and so I had a friend take a whole bunch of photos of me feeding her specifically to use for reference for paintings and drawings – I’m really looking forward to having a go at that. This has all the things I look for in a painting – fantastic use of colours, lots of wonderful patterns and a window into someone’s life.

Mother with child in her arms. Etching by Kathe Kollwitz, Trustees of the British Museum.

KATHE KOLLWITZ Mother with child in her arms

Another beautiful example; this is full of joy, and the lines are so lovely and so soft in it – it feels like a very well captured moment of intimacy. It focuses on the mother and her adoration, the child’s face obscured by shadow but no less present for that – everything of that grip and closeness is so beautifully and accurately portrayed. Try similar with charcoals perhaps?

Virgin of Vladimir. Tempera on panel – unknown artist, Church of St. Nicholas in Tolmachi.

Virgin of Vladimir

The biggest wealth of mother and child images of course are images of the Madonna and child. There are so many gorgeous depictions all over the world by all manner of known and forgotten artists – this is just one example but it is a lovely one. I do really like icon imagery – the flattening of the images and the simplified hands always give them such a specific feeling especially wit the wonderful rich gold leaf that they’re so often done in, it would be fun to play around with elements of these; they are so much a part of our cultural subconscious that even adding a little gold to a portrait of a mother and child would bring them immediately to the forefront.

Part four: feedback reflection

I’m really happy with my feedback from part four, I’d agree with all of the areas of development and am feeling excited and positive about the same areas too so it’s lovely to feel like I’m on the right track. The main pointers I got were as follows:

  • think about ratio of the paper and scale to make sure I can fit everything I want on the page.
  • continue combining media particularly with charcoal for the desired energy and rawness.
  • keep my individuality and don’t stylise too much or be over-influenced.
Fitting everything on to the paper is definitely a bit of a blind spot for me so that’s good to bear in mind and the other pointers really encourage me towards the work that I was most excited by such as the self portrait. It was interesting that my seated figure came across less well than the reclining figure where I had imagined it might be the other way round, though I can see looking at it now that the seated figure is a lot flatter and more stylised so possibly lacks something of the impact of the other two, she is also such a long slender model that she tends to look idealised anyway so the combination makes it even less real! I’ve also been recommended to be more self critical which is another useful thing to bear in mind – my opinions bounce up and down so much that perhaps I need to come back to each blog entry after a couple of days so I can be a bit more objective about my work. Often I’m not sure what I think of it, however when I really love something I know straight away such as with the self portrait so I’m looking forward to following that path with part 5.

Research: Self portrait inspiration

It’s hard to know where to begin with self portraits because surely every artist spends hours practising on themselves and they are almost always fascinating! Here are a few self portraits I’d like to remember elements from for my future work.

At the dressing table – Zinaida Serebriakova. (Tretyakov gallery) 

ZINAIDA SEREBRIAKOVA At the dressing table

I love this painting – mostly for it’s wonderful composition but also because she just exudes charm! Such a wonderful expression. I love the idea of including objects from ones life in this way, and glimpses into an interior.

Self-Portrait with Portrait of Émile Bernard (Les misérables) Van Gogh Museum, Amsterdam (Vincent van Gogh Foundation)

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I love everything about this. His use of colour is fantastic, the patterned wallpaper behind is exactly my cup of tea and the portrait pinned to the wall behind is a lovely element too. I like also knowing it’s backstory and so when I see it I see that tumultuous relationship with Vincent Van Gogh but specifically the beginning of their artistic relationship and the hope they both had for what would follow.

Egon Schiele, Nude Self-Portrait, Squatting, 1916. Pencil and gouache on packing paper. 29.5 x 45.8 cm. The Albertina Museum, Vienna.

EGON SCHIELE nude self portrait squatting

Egon Schiele again – I just love how unflattering and prima his paintings are – particularly as self portraits. The idea of squatting naked for a self portrait is so at odds with today’s selfie culture – I don’t think my self portraits are usually flattering but this would be taking it to another level!

Kathe Kollwitz, Self-Portrait with Hand on the Forehead (Selbstbildnis mit der Hand an der Stirn) The Met Museum

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This is lovely both because of it’s simple moody technique and because of the hand – it’s such a classic drawing pose and adds so much to the image having that hand included. It makes me wonder why all my self portraits don’t include a hand!

Part 4| Research: The human figure

I’ve been looking for paintings that show the human figure in a way that inspires me and researching how the body has been portrayed over the years. In the RA’s article Strike a pose: 250 years of drawing at the Royal Academy Annette Wickham looks at the progression from early traditions of drawing an idealised form to todays celebration of the quirks and flaws in the human form. Generally I find myself more drawn to the more modern and more seemingly truthful depictions that but some early works are just superb – I’ve included a mix here.

TITIAN Venus of Urbino

Titian, Venus of Urbino, Uffizi.

I love this, it’s such a gorgeous sensual picture with the directness of her gaze and the composition with such symbolism in the different elements of the painting. There’s something too about having both nude and clothed people in one image that makes the nudity seem exaggerated or slightly improper

BOTTICELLI primavera

Sandro Botticelli, Primavera. Tempera grassa on wood, Uffizi.

I’ve always loved this, and particularly the figure of Flora – due in no small part to me being a Flora too – but she is just so striking in this with her contented expression, crown of flowers and fantastic ripe figure. She is clothed but painted in such a way that she may as well be naked – it’s a false modesty when every line of the figure is so clearly seen through the cloth. I do love these images based on myths and legends where a whole story is laid out in a picture.

Illustration to the Arthurian Legend: Guenever 1938-40 by David Jones 1895-1974

David Jones, Illustration to the Arthurian Legend: Guenever. Graphite, ink and Watercolour, Tate Gallery.

Here’s another image telling a story – there is so much going on here and I love how busy it is, the focal point of the nude standing out as a lighter calmer area of the image. The body is beautifully and playfully drawn; it’s so simple and in some ways naïve but it’s also brilliantly drawn.

Standing by the Rags 1988-9 by Lucian Freud 1922-2011

Lucian Freud, Standing by the Rags. Oil on canvas, Tate Gallery.

Lucien Freud is so fantastic when it comes to flesh. He’s a great example of the more modern approach of celebrating warts and all and this is a particularly nice composition with the repeated folds of rags and flesh piled high.

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Amadeo Modigliani, Nude. Oil on canvas, Guggenheim museum.

Modigliani is a pretty far cry from Freud – his nudes are so simplified and stylised – it’s all smoothed down to perfection but I love them all the same.

Venus and Adonis c.1919 by Duncan Grant 1885-1978

Duncan Grant, Venus and Adonis. Oil on Canvas, Tate.

Another Venus and I love way this body has been pulled and contorted into completely unnatural and impossible positioning but still has an authenticity about it’s curves. A good reminder that you don’t have to stick to the truth.

Bathing 1911 by Duncan Grant 1885-1978

Duncan Grant, The bathers. Tate.

This is another of Duncan Grant’s – a totally different style of work but with that same contortion – somewhere between gorgeous and grotesque. I love the use of pattern and the flattened 2D feel of this too.

PABLO PICASSO Nude woman in a Red Armchair

Pablo Picasso, Nude woman in a Red Armchair. Tate.

Picasso has to feature – again showing that you do not have to stick to realism to create a wonderful and instantly recognisable picture. I feel all the more keen on Picasso since going to exhibition last year and seeing the impact his paintings had in the flesh (so to speak) – there’s something quite magic about them.

EGGON SCHIELE self portrait in crouching position

Egon Schiele, Self portrait in crouching position. Tate.

Egon Schiele has been my favourite artist since I was a teen, his paintings are so grotesque and so so beautiful, I’d love to try to bring something of his style into my work. his marks seem so quick and careless but are always exactly right and like Freud he seems to celebrate the flaws – almost going beyond finding the beauty in them to exaggerate the ugliness in them.

 

 

 

Research: Vija Celmins

Vija Celmins is not an artist I’d heard of and as a rule I really don’t like photorealistic work so I was surprised by how much I did like her work. I think what makes her work successful is isolating very specific things so that often you are left with just texture or just pattern but still very recognisably the subject. Her work is so far from my style of working but that could make her an interesting influence to have in mind as I go about the next exercises.

Part 3 | Research: Artists dealing with landscape

As with still life landscape never used to inspire me particularly, or rather I would enjoy other peoples work but it never really excited me in the same way that portraiture of life drawings would and certainly I never felt much temptation to do any myself. All of my previous attempts at landscape have left me incredibly frustrated at my complete inability to translate something so lovely on to paper, but I’ve looked forward to being forced to address that! It’s good to have an opportunity to research other peoples work to see what it is that does inspire me.

I looked first as suggested at the work of Albrecht Durer – I found his watercolours oddly emotive. Something of their simplicity coupled with the age of them makes you feel that you are getting a true view in to another time that is otherwise completely lost. Often older paintings feel heavy with the hang-ups of their time – they need to be to a certain level or showing a particular kind of image and I don’t fee; that at all with these, it’s more like a snapshot image of how it looked. (See View of Nuremberg for reference.)

I looked next at Claude Lorrain’s designed landscapes – the polar opposite! These are incredibly beautiful and so full of drama, just the trees themselves seem regal and lifted out of the ordinary into something quite different. However the image I loved most was one of his sketches Landscape with Bridge which doesn’t have anything of that precision and premeditation to it  – it’s just a beautifully done quick work more reminiscent of Edward Ardizonne.

I don’t think you can research Landscape without mentioning John Constable. His paintings have been so overused that it can be hard to see them for what they are but he was an extremely competent painter. Again these have that idealised rather too perfect look that does very little for me but his sketches (Such as Sketch of a Lane at East Bergholt) show how easily he captured light and colour.

L.S. Lowry as a rule I really do not like. There are aspects of his work that are interesting but I find the cartoonish people completely off putting. I can see he did something interesting by showing landscapes that up until then had been uncelebrated but it isn’t enough for me to be able to see past the people, I find them slightly grotesque – although perhaps they are meat to be.

Stanley Spencer in contrast really does do it for me! His garden and local landscape paintings are much more detailed and realistic than my usual taste I think but he does it beautifully and there is so much to look at! He often gives a lot more focus on the foreground than some landscape artists too which could be interesting to have a go at. My parents recently moved out of the old farm house that I grew up in – that would have been a perfect subject for this type of work, I might have a go from photographs – not at all the same but still useful practice. Rickett's Farm, Cookham Dene 1938 by Sir Stanley Spencer 1891-1959

Rickett’s farm, Cookham Dene – Tate.

Paul Nash is another artist that’s really exciting for me. Regretfully I missed his recent exhibition at the Tate and I heard such brilliant things about it, but I’ve done a fair bit of looking at his work since. His more surreal approach involving unlikely objects in the landscapes could be really interesting to play around with. Often he places something right at the foreground – whether it’s an object or selected plants – it is very obviously staged but in a really pleasing way. One of his most famous pieces Landscape of the Summer Solstice is a good example, it shows too his lovely use of very toned down colour which again I’d like to have a go at.

I came across Charles Mahoney’s Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden recently and really loved it, again bringing fiction in but in a really fantastic and beautiful way. Adding figures to the landscape changes it completely too – I’m not sure I’m confident enough for that yet but I think that mix is something I’d really enjoy. As well as complete fantasy such as this he did a lot of really wonderful landscapes of daily life – brick fields or a school house – again that’s something I could look at.

Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden exhibited 1936 by Charles Mahoney 1903-1968

 Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden, Charles Mahoney – Tate

From a drawing point of view his study for Adam and Eve is interesting too – lovely use of ink and wash which is my current favourite media.

Study for 'Adam and Eve' circa 1936 by Charles Mahoney 1903-1968

Study for Adam and Eve, Charles Mahoney – Tate

One of my absolute favourite contemporary artists is Paul Jackson, he does beautiful landscapes oil that are both intricate and very simple and he exhibits regularly in Sussex but he also does a lot of collage which he doesn’t generally sell but that I also love. I find these particularly inspiring as a different approach and way of almost painting with paper. This unnamed collage is from his Shipping Forecast collection on his Flickr account and is particularly impressive as a way of capturing clouds.

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Shipping forecast, Paul Jackson – Flickr

I hadn’t come across George Shaw before and found his work really interesting. I can’t work out if I like it or not. There’s something I find a bit gross about photorealistic painting but I do like his choice of subjects – he has a real photographer’s eye for beauty in unlikely places, I’d like to see his photographs! I’ll never be a photorealistic painter but I would like to try more subjects of this type and living in Tottenham there’s no shortage of them!

Sarah Woodfine is another new artist for me and although I really like her approach I don’t generally like her work, it’s a little cartoonish for me though I think too that it would probably have more impact seen in the flesh. It has made me want to try using paper for a 3D landscape though – perhaps just cut paper or collage, or possibly trying to create layers of different texture with fineliner. Something to come back to.

 

 

Vincent Van Gogh Exhibition

Just a quick one as I keep meaning to write up my visit to the Van Gogh exhibition at the Tate which was so wonderful! As always I came away wanting to paint but this exhibition also made me come away wanting to draw – there were some wonderful drawings using graphite and ink as well as beautiful etchings and it was particularly interesting to see how his style translated into drawings(See Paul Ferdinand Gachet Auvers-sur-Oise, etching on paper). It also introduced me to Harold Gilman who did some absolutely gorgeous stuff and somehow I hadn’t come across before.

One of my favourites of Van Gogh was Path in the garden of the Asylum Saint Remy which is a good one to look at when about to start on Part 3. I didn’t used to think much of Van Gogh but having read the Yellow House I could suddenly feel the excitement of his work and now I struggle to see how I could have missed it before! His brushwork has everything of the quickness and liveliness that I aspire to and his use of colours here is phenomenal.

Looking back at Assignment 1

I’ve been thinking back to assignment 1 quite a bit and to the feedback. Diana asked me to think about what the subject was and if it was the objects and the tablecloth to try darkening the background to make them stand out. I found on reflection that those aren’t the subject but I did want to have a look at what effect it would have anyway. Really I would have needed to have done that with a darker wash before putting the charcoal on top so that not being possible at this juncture I darkened it on photoshop instead and brightened the foreground:

It does really change the feeling of the picture so it’s quite interesting to try out but did reinforce for me that the subject wasn’t the objects themselves but the mesh of contrasting patterns that they and the fabrics make together. I think I’d be more inclined to go the other way – strip back some of the hatching and flatten the image even more so that the patterns are stronger and pop and clash even more! Ultimately though I’m happy with the picture, I’ve liked it more and more each time I look at it which is the opposite of what usually happens for me.