I’ve just had my first tutorial and feedback from assignment one, it was so good to speak to Diana face to face (albeit over screens) and to hear her thoughts and get a little more direction. It was well timed too – I had had a busy day what with taking my daughter to the doctors and the nursery drop off and then a full day of working from home plus supper and bedtime and a minor mountain of chores and so speaking to someone and remembering that I’m not doing it entirely alone and that it is worth putting my evenings aside for was just what I needed. The summarised feedback was as follows:
You have ambition to work with different media and complex compositions.
Be careful with the qualities of line. You demonstrated the range of these in your initial exercises. Treat each media differently so there is more investigation in your
work.
When you work simply with varied lines then the work can be compared.
Sometimes you can be too heavy handed especially when using charcoal and working with patterns. Try and simplify and work the opposite so there is more investigation into how you can apply media.
Your work is gestural, and physical.
Work on different surfaces to enhance the way you draw and investigate media.
Your visual language is good for this level.
Keep reflecting and be in tune with your progress by reviewing what you have done.
The feedback all felt really useful, I think the work that I like most in others is very loose and busy and so that is what I tend towards but I’m aware that I can be too heavy-handed or even just inaccurate and it could be really helpful to strip back and focus on fine-tuning before coming back to that style of work with better foundations. I liked Diana’s idea of continuing to work in whatever style comes naturally while also trying lighter or more simplified drawings so that I can compare and look at what works and what doesn’t to move on from there.
I think I need to work more in my sketchbooks to really play around with ideas and that was mentioned too in the feedback. I feel at the moment like I can feel some improvement with almost every exercise and if I gave each one more space for trial and error then it would only be a good thing. I’m going to root out my A3 sketchbook and start trying more sketches on a large scale as I think often the work I do in between the exercises is smaller and tighter and doesn’t build so much on my progress through the course.
I think it’s really useful to be reminded to be more sensitive to the media and think more about the different lines and different pressures that I could be using. I am quite looking forward to keeping that in focus through the next part of the course and also in experimenting with different paper as suggested by Diana.




















