Feedback on Assignment one

I’ve just had my first tutorial and feedback from assignment one, it was so good to speak to Diana face to face (albeit over screens) and to hear her thoughts and get a little more direction. It was well timed too – I had had a busy day what with taking my daughter to the doctors and the nursery drop off and then a full day of working from home plus supper and bedtime and a minor mountain of chores and so speaking to someone and remembering that I’m not doing it entirely alone and that it is worth putting my evenings aside for was just what I needed. The summarised feedback was as follows:

You have ambition to work with different media and complex compositions.
Be careful with the qualities of line. You demonstrated the range of these in your initial exercises. Treat each media differently so there is more investigation in your
work.

When you work simply with varied lines then the work can be compared.
Sometimes you can be too heavy handed especially when using charcoal and working with patterns. Try and simplify and work the opposite so there is more investigation into how you can apply media.

Your work is gestural, and physical.
Work on different surfaces to enhance the way you draw and investigate media.

Your visual language is good for this level.
Keep reflecting and be in tune with your progress by reviewing what you have done.

The feedback all felt really useful, I think the work that I like most in others is very loose and busy and so that is what I tend towards but I’m aware that I can be too heavy-handed or even just inaccurate and it could be really helpful to strip back and focus on fine-tuning before coming back to that style of work with better foundations. I liked Diana’s idea of continuing to work in whatever style comes naturally while also trying lighter or more simplified drawings so that I can compare and look at what works and what doesn’t to move on from there. 

I think I need to work more in my sketchbooks to really play around with ideas and that was mentioned too in the feedback. I feel at the moment like I can feel some improvement with almost every exercise and if I gave each one more space for trial and error then it would only be a good thing. I’m going to root out my A3 sketchbook and start trying more sketches on a large scale as I think often the work I do in between the exercises is smaller and tighter and doesn’t build so much on my progress through the course.

I think it’s really useful to be reminded to be more sensitive to the media and think more about the different lines and different pressures that I could be using. I am quite looking forward to keeping that in focus through the next part of the course and also in experimenting with different paper as suggested by Diana.

Project 1: Exercise 4 – shadows and reflected light

This was such an exciting exercise! We were asked to take two objects with reflective surfaces draw them tonally looking particularly at reflected light. It’s a really simple brief but I found it really daunting, I think I’m probably not very good at pushing myself and so although the sort of paintings and artworks that I like most often have quite a lot going on I don’t generally choose to do that sort of work myself. This was a really good exercise to prove to myself that actually I am capable of more complex work and I not only really enjoyed the process but am also really pleased with the final image! Learning from previous exercises I was more bold in my mark making but also comfortable with finer details, I think the only thing I might do differently looking at it again after a few days is to make the background much darker. It was fairly true to reality tonally but not nearly as competently achieved as the pot and jug and I think that had I used a bit of artistic licence and gone much darker I might have got closer to that atmosphere that Redon was so proficient at.

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Project 2: Exercise 3 – Creating shadow using lines and marks

For this exercise we were asked to use four drawing tools and make four distinct grades of tone using criss-crossing lines, hatching and spots with a simple object as the subject to experiment these techniques on. The wording on this exercise felt open to interpretation as to how you present the work and so I chose to draw my object (one of my daughter Ottilie’s blocks) very simply in each different medium with another drawing involving a mix of mediums and styles to look both at how different mediums compare and how different combinations of styles could be used together.

Because of my choice of object and the way I went about this exercise the drawings ended up more like simplified illustrations – I’m not sure if this was the intention but I did really enjoy the opportunity to draw in a different style and to think about how pattern might be incorporated into further work. The combination of styles worked better than I had envisaged and I’d definitely like to follow that up in another work at some point.

The second part of the exercise was to place a group of simple objects and do a very loose drawing and then work fast using hatching to give tonal shadows and make the sketches more believable as objects. I did as instructed but I think after the slower more deliberate mark making of the first part of the exercise I lost my flow for hatching and the resulting image doesn’t do anything for me as a drawing, though it did at least go to show how quickly you can add three dimensionality to a drawing.

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Research: Odilon Redon

Two Trees (charcoal on paper) c. 1875 by Odilon Redon was a useful reminder to me of the true potential of Charcoal as well as of how far I have to go; while I’ve been really enjoying the medium and producing better work that I like more and more none of it has the subtlety or atmosphere that is visible here. Redon takes a very mundane subject and makes it almost abstract in it’s broad strokes and shapes but retains such fine detail at closer inspection, the tonal contrasts give great depth to the image and it’s these large areas of dark and light that make it so atmospheric. I looked too at A Knight, c.1885, which has that same fantastic atmosphere as Two Trees and a dream-like quality that so many of his works have. I like particularly those images like this one that carry that dream-like quality without losing any of the vivid believable style – so that the image could almost have been drawn from life but for the element of fantasy.

Looking at other work of his in different medium you see that the fantasy element is present across the board and that those great swathes of tone present in his charcoals translate to large plains of colour in other works giving quite a different feeling. I love The Crown, 1910 (pastel and charcoal), for it’s simplicity and emotion giving it an entirely different type of charm. It is for me an example of how pastel can be used effectively – a medium I’m not generally so keen on. Another particularly fantastical work Lumiere, 1893 (litho) sees again that vivid contrast and great areas of light and dark and once again the atmosphere is so successfully achieved even in this much less realistic style.

I’d like to try to experiment with richer contrast and larger areas of tone in my own work and see if it has that same atmospheric affect, I’m not sure how my style of drawing will hold it, it could be that I need to try to shake off my style to really give it the best chance of working. I’m particularly interested in how the finer details are maintained when working with such strong tone, that isn’t something I’ve achieved in my work so far and it would be great to work towards that.

 

Project 2: Exercise 2 – Observing shadow using blocks of tone

For this exercise we were asked to take two simple shaped objects together lit from one side and then draw them focusing on tones – first blocking in the mid-tones and then light and dark progressing to include all the fine details. I wanted to continue working with charcoal to see how I could progress with that medium and give it more depth. I did a quick sketch first to warm up and get the feel of the general areas of light and dark on the objects and then went on to complete the exercise, again on A2.

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I’m really pleased with how this turned out, I hadn’t really used charcoal in this way before or ever spent this amount of time on a charcoal image preferring to use charcoal just for quick sketching in life drawing and I also hadn’t used putty in this way before. It took me a little while to get the hang of the putty and so there are a couple of areas where I overworked it and then wasn’t able to get quite the effect I wanted but once I’d got the hang of it it I really enjoyed it and felt it added the depth that had been missing from the picture before. Some of the lines that give the dimensions of the objects aren’t perfect and that could be worked on but it does give the feeling and the weight of the objects which was my primary focus carrying on from the previous exercises.

Project 2: Exercise 1 – Groups of objects

We were asked to choose at least six objects of different sizes and shapes and loosely describe the collection using one colour. I used charcoal having enjoyed working with it in the previous exercises and worked on an A2 sheet not a dissimilar size from the group of objects themselves.

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I drew sections of the arrangement from three viewpoints and found that as I worked my drawing became more linear and bold as I became more confident with the medium. I prefer the bolder slightly more simplified drawings – worth remembering to try to do warm up sketches in future to build confidence before embarking on an exercise. The more linear drawings worked particularly well for the black plastic bag and it could be a good subject to go back to and draw on its own to build up that style. The small knitted bear I included thinking that it would be a difficult texture to translate onto paper and I don’t think that was particularly successful, though it gives something of the feeling of it.

Project 1: Exercise 2 – Experimenting with texture

For this exercise I took four textures from around my home and depicted each one using frottage, pencil drawing and ink. The textures I used were wood, the underside of lino, a woven plant pot and a decorative tin bowl.

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I was interested in which medium would best articulate the feeling of the texture rather give the most accurate depiction. I had expected frottage to give a more immediate feeling of the textures but this wasn’t really the case, in all except wood the feeling of the texture comes across really well in the more simplified ink pictures, as well I think as the more accurate detailed pencil drawings. I particularly like the repeated patterns of the woven plant pot and underside of lino, these would look good scaled up – I can imagine using them as an element of a big colourful screenprint at some point!

Project 1: Exercise 1 – Experimenting with expressive lines and marks

For this exercise we were asked to spend time inhabiting four different emotions one at a time and with each emotion creating four non-objective images using four mediums; in my case charcoal, ink and a stick, pastel and marker pen.

The emotions I worked with were calm, anger, joy and grief. I found this exercise immediately educational as I initially set out to work on calm and though I spent a good amount of time focusing on that emotion I got half way through and realised I was way off the mark. I’ve just been through a separation from my husband and so this is a time of very marked emotions for me and however much I tried I was I couldn’t on that particular day reach the level of calm required. I also had the radio playing and although the music had been reasonably calm when I started by the time I stopped it was playing really upbeat dance tunes! The resulting images were all over the place, it was a bit of a crash course in the importance of environmental factors as well as taking note of your own emotional state and working with rather than against that.

Here is my initial attempt that I abandoned:

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A couple of days later I came back to it on a day when I was feeling completely on top of everything, I switched off the radio and put on a specific playlist, gave myself a few minutes to wind down and tried again. Music really helped and I used that as a tool for each of the emotions.

Calm

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Anger

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Joy

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Grief

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I was struck afterwards by how unidentifiable some of the images were; joy for example was so present while I was creating those images but in looking at them from the outside the majority of them could just as easily be said to represent anger, calm or grief! The medium affected the images greatly too; charcoal seemed to portray the emotions best in all except joy for which I think marker pen is the only image that really conveys any sense of joy. I really enjoyed working with ink and stick too and love how those images came out, perhaps not quite as recognisable as those emotions but more successful as finished artworks. The least successful in every case was the oil pastel which is not a medium I would have chosen although it worked to some extent for anger.

This exercise again forced me to work in abstraction and I loved the freedom that came with that, I would like to take some of these images as starting points for future studies  creating a new series of abstract images based around emotion or perhaps a series looking at separation and the emotions that brings up.

Exercise 1: Warm up – temporary drawing

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I chose to use rice on a baking sheet to create my temporary drawing and really enjoyed the unpredictability that the surface gave – akin to iron filings reacting to a magnet. It was a lovely warm up to push me straight into in a more abstract direction than I would usually go, and there was a sense of freedom in knowing that it wouldn’t be permanent.

I really like the pattern created here and would like to revisit it later it in a different medium.